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OPENING LINES

Was it time to leave?  Many of the guests were standing.  Of course they had cars or carriages; none had to walk.  It could be worse, a quarter moon offered plenty of light and it was less than a mile to the main road.  Surely a ride would come along.  If only the pack weren’t so heavy.  What if someone asked to see what was in it?

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