Fix This: February Correction

This is a prime example showing the weakness of adverbs.  “He said ‘angerly’.”  How angry?  We don’t know because the adverb only tells.  Show it.  “Get out of my office.”  He jabbed a finger.  “Get out of my office!”  He slapped the desktop.  “Get out of my office!”  He shoved back in his chair.  These show the level of anger.  Remember too, the fewer words in cases such as these, are more powerful than many.

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