Fix This: December

When it comes time to sell, it is vital that you impress.  Good grammar, punctuation, and active writing are important.  Fix this.

Winston tastes good like a cigarette should.

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5 Responses to Fix This: December

  1. Pat Longley says:

    He took a deep draw on his Winston cigarette, savoring the flavor..

  2. Anonymous says:

    Winston tastes good, as a cigarette should.

  3. doylehmckim says:

    Sorry, it should read: Yep, to Anonymous. I’d do well to take my own advice.

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